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Nov 24

THE RAIN

The rain
It falls…

The rain
It falls down…

The rain
It falls down on my head…

The rain
It falls down on my head and chills…

The rain
It falls down on my head and chills my heart…

The rain
It falls down on my head and chills my heart and soul…

The rain
It falls down on my head and chills my heart and soul to the bone…

The rain
It falls down on my head and chills my heart and soul to the bone and makes me think…

The rain
It falls down on my head and chills my heart and soul to the bone and makes me think of you…

The rain
It falls down on my head and chills my heart and soul to the bone and makes me think of you and my great loss…

The rain
It falls down on my head and chills my heart and soul to the bone and makes me think of you and my great loss or shall I say your great loss…

The rain
Oh this is just lovely, I’m getting wet and you lost my umbrella
The Rain

-Candace Mountain

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  1. Alex Russell

    Hello Candace,

    I enjoyed that.
    In my epic poem “iDream Ice Cream iScream” is a little snippet along parallel lines:

    In the park some are at ease
    They do as they please
    A pleasure they treasure is leisure

    In the slanting sunlight
    In slinky slacks and sleeveless shirt
    A slim sleepy
    (and rather creepy)
    Slav called Sly
    Slides…
    Slides down the slider
    Then slips…
    Slips on something…
    Slips on something more comfortable…
    His slippers
    Then slips away

  2. Graham

    Loved it, Candace.

  3. James Wirshing

    Nicely done, Candace.

  4. Mithu Hassan

    Really love this Candace !!

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